Re:Zero Side Content Corrections Topic

Eminent

Find any mistakes in the compilation? Let me know here!

Kelaver

Hi @Eminent! Thank You for Your wonderful translations and this compilation. It's great to have it in one file.
One story is missing. There is a human translation for Sword Identity Part 3&4:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iDZPzOFexO6k9r1ANDIjhGJ93JgALcRPCltOzt-TLs4/edit

I've noticed, that only one SS from Compendium 1 is pending:
Emilia and Ram’s Very Bumpy Master-Servant Relationship. Are there any significant differencies between Shop Special and Shouhenshuu versions of this SS or any other? Which version would You recommend?

I've spotted one typo in contents and title of Volume 34 SS:
THE DRAGON KINGDOM: MEILI’S WITCHBEAST OBSERVATION RECORD II (II instead of III)

Eminent

@Kelaver Thanks for reporting the corrections! I'll take care of them.
I know about the SI translations. I suppose I can add those to the tanpenshuu version of the story, but it makes it awkward since it's half comic alive and half tanpenshuu.

I wouldn't say there are significant differences other than some editing and typo fixes, but what I do is read shop specials after the volume they came with. The compendium is good if you want to read them in one go. I will translate the missing SS from 1 at some point.

Kelaver

@Eminent I suspected it might be the case with SI. In the end, I think, that half CA half TP is better than just unfinished story and it probably will be a long time before someone revise it. The author of translation acknowledges differencies in one scene between versions, so switch from CA to TP shouldn't be confusing. Maybe add some notification that you can continue from CA Part 2 to TP and vice versa.

It's sad, that they cut content from Comic Alive SI version in Tanpenshuu, because I thought, that TP is definitive, refined version. Maybe they need to keep strict page limit in a volume and some information needed to be cut?

Eminent

@Kelaver True enough. The next version will have it.

Who knows. The editor does what he wants.

Kelaver

@Eminent Hi, I've noticed minor mistake in one SS. "Rem meets Subaru" the start of Section 3, second sentence:
"Healing the boy in the boy that had been taken in took at dawn took a lot of time; outside the window, the sun was already setting westward in orange light. It wouldn’t be long before night approaches." - some clunky grammar

There are some missing SS:
Mayonnaise Scramble:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1S4LIw4VVSIJtdJGsl1xIjfo0EOUZw2sOGHQX-b3_VZM/edit
Withdrawal Symptoms:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gXPF3WJU88xGF5jjenP2SJzmQXTAhC9byhGK9plyRwA/edit?pref=2&pli=1

Those are from web novel, but I see, that you included King Chapter from the same translator, so those could also be added.
There are other interludes, like One Day II about Crush and Gorgeous Tiger Reloaded about Garfiel, but they are already included in main story compilation, so maybe there is no need to include them here.

There is also Glossary:
https://remzerotranslation.wordpress.com/2021/02/09/glossary/

Eminent

@Kelaver Hi again. As I am not the one who translated that, there's not much I can do there. Generally I'll only fix typos in other people's translations.

Oh I see! I can definitely add those to the doc, for now. Those will stay in the comp until I get to the end of arc 2/3. One Day II used to be in it until it got moved to the WN compilation. WN stuff generally stays with the WN.

I can definitely add the Glossary to the next version of the compilation! I have yet to update it, but it should be updated within the next month!

Eminent

@Kelaver Just uploaded a new version of the side content compilation!
Also, your commission should be finished sometime next week!

Kelaver

@Eminent Nice I'm glad to hear it! Funny that this month LH will be published in Tanpenshuu with Extra SS in Shop Special. Are You planning to check out, if there are any differencies in TP version?

Thanks for the update. Sorry, if I'm nagging, but I've found more possible additions for future update.

One Ram&Rem birthday SS is absent (Oni Sisters of the Hidden Village: Happy Bad Dream):
https://remzerotranslation.wordpress.com/2021/10/03/oni-sisters-of-the-hidden-village-a-happy-bad-dream/

Are You planning to add translation of Riot in Flanders? I know, that there is separate file in download section, but here it isn't even listed in contents.

What about Apocalypse Girls? Maybe You don't include unfinished/abandoned translations, but Stand By Me Pleiades and Brotherhood of Pleiades (btw Part 2 is already tranlated) are there. Some scrabs like Kasaneru Novel aren't worth addition, but over half of AG is already translated (Prologue+ 3 Chapters) and new version from Garcar seems to be year away:
https://docs.google.com/document/u/0/d/14WOPc3jhK3jXKypJ0k5eg4o2ytB-LjT2kNq3mwwwn-w/mobilebasic

Epilogue to Before Memories is translated, but prologue isn't (chapters are separate stories), so maybe it's better to wait for full tanslation:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1EMWezSUXKL6KDoViWgL5URMSio7brQrehQL4Wcq0gPk/edit
Btw, it probably follows OVA continuity, because I've read Bonds of Ice Novel and don't remember Emilia rescuing any family, but it was included in a movie.

There are 3 excerpts from Visual Complete translated. Nice character introductions:
https://kotodamatranslations.blogspot.com/2023/05/rezero-visual-complete-priscilla-comment.html
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cY1gKSQp4CSPwZCGJvseZ8ZE-8jjEnDCUil7XkrHqic/edit
https://kotodamatranslations.blogspot.com/2020/12/rezero-visual-complete-otto-comment.html

Non Canon Konosuba X Re:Zero Collaboration, Emilia and Rem parts:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Bv69OAfGbpz52yQXKfJz1h8nXcPbcBjRp-UQ5wnXLSw/edit?usp=sharing
https://remonwater.wordpress.com/2017/05/09/give-blessings-to-the-beautiful-maid/

Thank You for Your work!

Eminent

@Kelaver said in Re:Zero Side Content Compilation Corrections Topic:

@Eminent Nice I'm glad to hear it! Funny that this month LH will be published in Tanpenshuu with Extra SS in Shop Special. Are You planning to check out, if there are any differencies in TP version?

Thanks for the update. Sorry, if I'm nagging, but I've found more possible additions for future update.

One Ram&Rem birthday SS is absent (Oni Sisters of the Hidden Village: Happy Bad Dream):
https://remzerotranslation.wordpress.com/2021/10/03/oni-sisters-of-the-hidden-village-a-happy-bad-dream/

Are You planning to add translation of Riot in Flanders? I know, that there is separate file in download section, but here it isn't even listed in contents.

What about Apocalypse Girls? Maybe You don't include unfinished/abandoned translations, but Stand By Me Pleiades and Brotherhood of Pleiades (btw Part 2 is already tranlated) are there. Some scrabs like Kasaneru Novel aren't worth addition, but over half of AG is already translated (Prologue+ 3 Chapters) and new version from Garcar seems to be year away:
https://docs.google.com/document/u/0/d/14WOPc3jhK3jXKypJ0k5eg4o2ytB-LjT2kNq3mwwwn-w/mobilebasic

Epilogue to Before Memories is translated, but prologue isn't (chapters are separate stories), so maybe it's better to wait for full tanslation:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1EMWezSUXKL6KDoViWgL5URMSio7brQrehQL4Wcq0gPk/edit
Btw, it probably follows OVA continuity, because I've read Bonds of Ice Novel and don't remember Emilia rescuing any family, but it was included in a movie.

There are 3 excerpts from Visual Complete translated. Nice character introductions:
https://kotodamatranslations.blogspot.com/2023/05/rezero-visual-complete-priscilla-comment.html
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cY1gKSQp4CSPwZCGJvseZ8ZE-8jjEnDCUil7XkrHqic/edit
https://kotodamatranslations.blogspot.com/2020/12/rezero-visual-complete-otto-comment.html

Non Canon Konosuba X Re:Zero Collaboration, Emilia and Rem parts:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Bv69OAfGbpz52yQXKfJz1h8nXcPbcBjRp-UQ5wnXLSw/edit?usp=sharing
https://remonwater.wordpress.com/2017/05/09/give-blessings-to-the-beautiful-maid/

Thank You for Your work!

Sorry, LH is taking a little longer than anticipated, but will be out this month! I will be doing the SS that comes with Tanpenshuu 9 as well, and the Tanpenshuu version of LH of course!

I did not know about the birthday SS. Will add it in the next version.

I totally forgot to add Riot to the doc, sorry!

I can add the current translations of Apoc Girls as well, and will add BoP part 2.

I will be translating Before Memories at some point. It takes place seven years in the past and features the other camps.

I can add the Visual Complete stuff too.

I'd like to translate the collab someday too, but can add those parts to the doc for now.

Kelaver

@Eminent Yeah, no problem, take Your time. You could even wait for Tanpenshuu version of LH and release them simultaneously. There's no need to be in a hurry (or hustle )